Career Advice for Job Seekers

Gaining An Edge In The Admissions Process

September 20, 2007


As you start the process of applying for college, you may feel as if your life is turning into one big checklist. Letters of recommendation? Check. Financial aid paperwork? Check. Transcripts? Check. In the midst of this series of steps that may begin with an online tour and end with an online-application decision, you may wonder if there is a real person on the other end evaluating what you send in.
Does someone actually read the stack of paperwork that you’ve generated? The answer is definitely yes! So as you wade through the sometimes daunting list of tasks that must be completed before you can pack your bags and head off to “your” campus, don’t forget a crucial part of the process: the quality that colleges call self-advocacy, a term which could be described as “the ability to sell yourself.”
While humility is a wonderful trait, the admissions process is your opportunity to demonstrate its opposite. To gain an edge in the admissions process, part of your job is to convince admissions counselors that they want you to attend their college!

How to be a self- advocate
in the admissions process

  • Visit the campus
  • Set up an interview
  • Meet with a professor
  • Stay overnight
  • Contact a coach
  • E-mail an admissions counselor
  • Attend a regional reception or
    workshop
  • Ask thoughtful questions
  • Send a thank-you note

Connecting with campuses
You may not realize that colleges and universities track the level of interest you’ve expressed in attending their particular institution. In most instances, when you tour a campus, have an interview, stay overnight, or meet with the athletic director, this information is recorded in your admissions file. When a member of the admissions staff reads your application, your interest in that college–as expressed by the number of substantive contacts you’ve made–is noted.
Will this be the most important consideration when the admissions committee meets to assess your candidacy? Of course not. But will it be a factor? Yes, it will. In addition to your transcript, standardized test scores, and letters of recommendation, your interest level is also evaluated. Two applicants may seem quite similar on paper, but the student who has actually visited the campus or attended a regional reception may garner an intangible advantage over another student who has had very little contact with the college.
The good news and the bad news
The current demographics make self-advocacy in the admissions process more important than ever. Between now and the year 2008, more college-age students will seek admission to an institution of higher education than at any previous time in American history. The result will be a lot of competition for the spaces available. That’s the bad news. The good news, however, is that 92% of America’s colleges and universities admit more than 50% of the students who apply. Those are actually pretty good odds. If you are a college applicant, the cards are stacked in your favor.
Where you need to play your cards exceptionally well, though, is in applying to selective colleges–those colleges and universities that say “no” or “maybe” more than “yes” to their applicants. At many of these selective colleges and universities, campus contact may help move students from the “maybe” to the “yes” pile. But regardless of the selectivity of a college or university, advocating politely for admission is an important part of the application process.
Extra challenges
Some students may face special challenges. Money to help finance your education may be in short supply–or nonexistent. Perhaps you and your parents do not see eye-to-eye about what colleges you should apply to. There might have been a problem you faced during one point in high school which caused your grades to slip a little. There’s no doubt that these realities may make threading your way through the admissions process more difficult. But these extra challenges can also work in your favor in the self-advocacy process. For example, you may have worked harder than some of your peers to get where you are now, or you may feel very strongly about wanting to attend college. If so, these are things a college needs to hear about you, things that could actually make you an even more attractive candidate.

The diversity question
Colleges want higher percentages of students of color on their campuses. With recent court rulings, many colleges cannot ask specifically about race; however, if race is mentioned tacitly, admissions committees do take notice. If race is important to you, then it is important to the admissions committee. Therefore, if you belong to a heritage club, attend a historically black church, or live in a diverse community, find a way to make note of this in your application. All of these can be noted on your resumé or list of activities you submit as part of your application.

How to advocate
The college interview. How do you appropriately advocate for yourself (sell yourself) without becoming overbearing or appearing pushy? There are many ways, but the most common is the college interview.
Interviews afford you the opportunity to highlight your strengths. Be prepared to discuss the following:

  • A time when you overcame adversity
  • Your proudest moment
  • People whom you admire
  • New experiences you would like to have
  • Why you are passionate about certain subjects and activities
  • What you value
  • How others see you and how you assist them

Your answers to these questions provide the admissions committee with a more complete picture of who you are, thereby creating an image of you as a real person rather than a compilation of numbers and test scores.
Prepping to promote yourself. Plan ahead! Before you interview, make a list of your strengths, what differenti ates you from other applicants, how you have grown both academically and socially in high school, and the things about you that make you and others happy. The ways in which you are different from other candidates can work to your advantage; enrolling you as a student might help a school reach its goal of becoming more diverse.
A helpful hint. It’s a good idea to offer some positive comments about the college or university you’re interested in, such as things you like about the campus or how informative the school’s website is. Admissions counselors enjoy talking with students who are well-informed about their institution and are more likely to look upon them favorably. And be sure to follow up on your interview with a thank-you note.

You are unique—highlight this in your application

  • List cultural club affiliations.
  • During an interview or in an essay, discuss the importance of race in your life.
  • If English is not your first language, let the admissions committee know.
  • Tell the school about the community in which you live.
  • State the values instilled in you by your community and family.

Meetings with directors of special programs. In addition to the admissions interview, meeting with a coach, the choral director, or the theater department chair can be helpful, too. Though they are not on the admissions staff itself, these individuals do have some influence in the admissions process. Interest expressed by members of the campus community on behalf of talented students can have a positive effect on an admissions counselor’s evaluation.
Questions as a method for selfadvocacy. If you have a question about a school, ask! If the answer to your question is readily available on the website, then querying something obvious is not going to work in your favor. However, if you have a more unusual question (for example, how many environmental science students conduct field work), then by all means ask. Admissions counselors remember students who ask good questions and demonstrate a desire to understand their institutions. An impressive question such as “How can I contribute to your college?” can be a powerful statement for admissions counselors to use in advocating on your behalf. This is more than just a question. It’s a value statement that tells an admissions counselor that assisting others is important to you.
Open houses. Colleges and universities host open houses throughout the year. The goal of an open house is to expose prospective students to everyday life at a college. You sit in on classes, meet with professors, learn about extracurricular activities, and dine in the cafeteria. Your willingness to participate–to devote a day to learning more about a college or university–emphasizes your level of commitment. Your demonstrated interest in a school might be the factor that tips the scale and results in your receiving an acceptance letter from that campus.
Exceptions to the rule
Admissions counselors are well aware of the financial burden of making on-campus visits, especially for students who live thousands of miles away. If your home is a long distance from the institution to which you are applying, if your time is limited due to family and work commitments, or if money concerns are an issue for your family, then rest assured that campus contact will not be weighted as heavily in the admissions process.
But don’t let your lack of proximity or the price tag involved in visiting a college campus deter you from connecting. Regional receptions and campus-visit subsidies do exist. If an on-campus interview with an admissions counselor is not possible, then one off campus with an alumnus who lives near you can achieve the same result.
So as you move through the college application process, be sure self-advocacy is listed right up there with transcripts, tests, teacher recommendations, and financial aid information. You know what it means now–and even better, you know how to do it.
Self-advocacy? Check!

Essay Tips: Where to Begin?
Before attempting to write any kind of application essay, you might find it useful to consider the following questions:

  • What are your special talents or skills?
  • What is unique about you?
  • What makes you different from everybody else?
  • What was the most embarrassing experience you have ever had?
  • What events in your life caused you to change?
  • What are your hopes and fears?
  • What was the best day of your life?
  • What has been one of your biggest challenges to date? How did you get through it?

Sample First Sentences
Which opening sentences grab your attention? Which ones make you want to read more? Would you like to meet the person who wrote this essay?

  • “I did not want to be Jesus, but everyone voted for me.”
  • “The person I admire most in life is a convicted felon.”
  • “My bedroom . . . how can I explain it?”
  • “I began applying to colleges in early October.”

Reminders

  • The essay question is not intended to trick you but to help you find the power of your own voice.
  • Humor helps. When one college asked students to describe themselves in one word, thousands were “determined,” but only one—a swimmer—was “wet.” Just remember to use good taste!
  • The essay should tell who you are so that it distinguishes you from other applicants.
  • The decision to admit or deny does not hinge on the essay. However, it certainly can influence a decision.
  • Show that you are willing to think—because hopefully, that is what you will be doing a great deal of in the years ahead!

 

A Sample Essay

Stephanie Oh
Duke University
Durham, North Carolina
Class of 2009

As I sat down to write this essay, I realized that I first had to find a voice. I promptly dialed 1-800-ENGLISH to reach the English Language Hotline service. (Three rings and an automated operator’s voice begins . . .)

“Thank you for calling The English Language Hotline. At this time, there are three options from which you may choose, all of which will provide you with a distinct voice to ensure that your writing will be absolutely memorable.

“The first is called Circumlo-Q-cious. By choosing this option, you will acquire a style of writing that is considered both contemporary and sophisticated. For example, you no longer have to be satisfied with the plain old proverb, ‘the pen is mightier than the sword.’ Instead, with Circumlo-Q-cious, you can say: ‘The rod-like device or contrivance often associated with words and blue or black liquid that is taken grip of in either the right or left of what follows the termination of the arm, is said to impose greater power than the object used for fighting or defense which has a slight hilt by which it is held and an extended part that has the purpose of shearing or severing.’ This is a popular choice among many politicians and high-ranking socialites today. If you would like to amaze friends and family members right away with a flashy and intelligent new voice, press one.

“The second is called ComputerSpeak. By going with this option, you will be able to spew out clipped, trendy one-liners and phrases without having to think at all. For example: ‘U kno that saying. About the pen. Haha. I kno I kno, lol itz so old newz. Omg so wutz new?’ In recent years, this has become the number-one choice amongst teens and the modern generation of youth. If you would like to fit in without effort and write with a wonderfully conventional voice, press two.

“The third and last style of voice is called Golden Oldie. This option will allow you to write with a distinguished quality and flair and is based on the styles of some of the twentieth century’s most established writers, including George Orwell and Robert Frost. If you would like to be immediately nominated for a Pulitzer, press three.

“This concludes the list of options that are available. If you would like to hear this message repeated, press four. Once again, thank you for calling the English Language . . .”

My head was spinning with a mixture of emotions and indecision. Though the first two options initially came across as absurd, I quickly recognized them, much to my embarrassment, as voices that I myself had used before. How appropriate they once seemed, and how silly they sounded now. My hand swiftly passed over buttons one and two, then precariously hovered above number three; both Orwell and Frost were my heroes. However, I did not wish to emulate either of them at the expense of their individuality. Could it be that the hotline had nothing to offer me? It dawned upon me then that finding a voice of my own was not a matter of one phone call. Instead, it would be achieved by a steady process requiring countless hours of dedication, crumpled-up balls of paper, and an openness of both mind and heart. That didn’t sound so bad. So I hung up the phone and welcomed the dial tone as it buzzed in my ear.

Then, I picked up where I had left off and continued to write.

Article by Kelly Herrington and courtesy of www.careersandcolleges.com

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